Progress Monitoring

I apologize in advance for yet another gym/yoga-related analogy, but this is my current life! During a recent workout session my trainer exclaimed, “I cannot believe how flexible you are!” He asked me how long it took for me to be able to do a certain stretch. At first, I didn’t have a clue how to answer. My response became something about my regular yoga practice over the last six months helping improve my flexibility tremendously.

This made me think about the importance of progress monitoring. My trainer monitors my progress through my weight, body fat percentage, and ability to do more- lift more, move faster, etc. He plans out how often he will measure my progress and keeps track of it in my file. Without this monitoring, I would have spent way too much time stressing out about numbers on the scale in isolation, instead of being able to see the big picture of my health improvements.

Progress monitoring in the classroom is equally important. Knowing what we want our students to learn, and then checking if they’ve learned it is crucial. This information also drives differentiated instruction and intervention supports.

But what does progress monitoring look like when you are a leader, working with adults? As a coach, supporting improved instruction? Or a principal or district leader, ensuring quality teaching and learning for all students?  How do you monitor progress within your leadership team?  How do you support leaders in setting goals and monitoring their own progress?

 

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Taking a Comprehensive Approach to Common Core Roll Out

I wrote this over a year ago and it was finally published by the Phi Delta Kappan Educational journal in their online Common Core support journal. 

I’ve just entered a 5th grade classroom with two site-based Academic Coaches. We are doing a version of instructional rounds as a team—discussing instructional practices aligned to the Common Core State Standards (CCSS). We’ve been here before, we’ve been working together to support our district implementation of the English-Language Arts (ELA) CCSS. The teacher is open and welcoming, the coaches are eager to coach and to be coached; in fact, the coaches invited me to visit today. The teacher’s lesson is focused on the fifth grade reading standard six for Informational Text — Analyze multiple accounts of the same event or topic, noting important similarities and differences in the point of view they represent.  As the lesson progresses, I see that the direction the teacher is headed is not aligned to the standard and I coach the coaches into this same realization. As we discuss how to provide support in this teachable moment, the teacher begins to direct the students into practice that will further their misunderstanding.  I look to the coaches—they share my understanding that this is a pivotal opportunity to support the instruction of this teacher. They know her well, and with that knowledge they encourage me to offer immediate side-by-side modeling.  I am able to talk to the teacher and model a quick direct instruction example with the students to redirect the focus to align with the standards.

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As a district, we created a system-wide support for our Common Core English-Language Arts implementation through professional development, coaching, and support.  Every leader and coach in our district participated in over 40 hours of professional development during the 2012-2013 school year to prepare for our CCSS ELA roll out.  We front-loaded our leadership staff with learning and then supported them through the facilitation of that learning at their sites.  Each teacher participated in at least eight hours of professional development over the summer.  During the first year of full implementation, 2013-2014, we continued to provide professional development at the district level for leaders and coaches, with site-based support as needed.  Our board goals were rewritten to focus on CCSS alignment within classrooms, as opposed to previous goals around Adequate Yearly Progress (AYP) measures.  This system was designed to support the instructional shifts necessary to meet the expectations of the Common Core.

As a district administrator, I work closely with our instructional coaches.  We fund at least one coach position as each school to support teaching and learning.  Our coaches receive professional development along with their principals through our leadership work.  In addition, we meet monthly for our own professional learning as coaches, participating in book studies, professional readings, twitter chats, blog writing, and content learning.   We spend much of our time discussing research-based instructional strategies and the ways to support teachers to incorporate these strategies into their daily practice.

Guiding my work each day is the belief that “To be productive and to accomplish organizational goals, schools need cohesive and cooperative relationships.  Trust is essential to fostering these relationships” (Tschannen-Moran, 2004, p.16).  I visit schools to work directly with our coaches.  During site visits we observe classroom instruction, discuss instructional strengths, and determine coaching messages that will enhance or improve instructional practices.  It is through multiple site visits a year, personal conversations with coaches, and individual feedback to coaches and teachers that I developed collaborative, trusting relationships that allow me to support instructional shifts through on-the-spot coaching.

Instruction does not change overnight.  Fully aligned CCSS instruction does not happen by accident.  Intentional professional development with on-going coaching and support are critical.  Research shows that on average it takes “20 separate instances of practice for a teacher to master a new skill, and this number may increase if a skill is exceptionally complex,” (Gulamhussein, 2013).  The skills required for teachers to align their instruction to the complex expectations of the Common Core State Standards demand multiple practice opportunities for teachers and coaches.  Coaching to support CCSS-aligned instruction requires in-depth knowledge of the standards as well as the instructional shifts necessary to meet the expectations of the standards.

Let’s return to the classroom example I mentioned earlier.   The Common Core State Standards call for major shifts to our instructional practices, with a greater focus on text complexity, deeper levels of student cognition, and more analytical reading and writing.  The College and Career Readiness Anchor Standard for Reading Standard Six calls for students to, “Assess how point of view or purpose shapes the content and style of a text” (Core Standards, 2014).  There are many misconceptions about this standard.  Teachers familiar with the idea of first person versus third person narration are teaching a limited version of their grade level’s expectation.  As students progress out of the primary grades, this standard, especially in Informational Texts, requires students to understand point of view in relation to the author’s perspective, which is a new and unfamiliar concept to many teachers.

The 5th grade classroom we entered that day, was struggling with this concept. The teacher, while dedicated and embracing new learning, was still emerging in her understanding of this standard. She was directing her class to identify the author’s point of view, but students’ interpreted that direction to mean “state the opinion of the author”.  The students were, at first, using a text that was not complex enough to do the thinking or analysis required of the standard.  As we coached the teacher, she provided her students with a much richer, more complex text.  I modeled, for the teacher and the students, a connection between “point of view” and “perspective”, asking the students to take a moment to read the blurb about the author (who happened to be a holistic doctor) before reading the article.  The students had been studying the use, or over-use, of personal devices.  I asked the students to think for a moment about what point of view, or perspective, this particular author might bring to the topic.  This slight shift reframed the purpose of the standard for the teacher and gave the students a more authentic purpose for reading the article.

It was only through direct contact with the teacher in the act of teaching that we were able to positively affect this instructional shift. While professional development opportunities, supported planning time, and ongoing site-level support provided the structure for this lesson, it was the one-on-one teachable moment that truly turned the tide. From there, the teacher and the coaches were able to share their new learning with the entire 5th grade team during their PLC later that same day, affecting a larger instructional shift at this site. In fact, I received separate emails from both of the academic coaches as well as the teacher after this visit. In each email, my colleagues shared their new understandings of the standard in question as well as the instructional shifts necessary to meet the standard.

Fisher, Frey, and Uline (2013) define five shifts in literacy instruction with full alignment to CCSS:

  1. Focus on reading and writing to inform, persuade, and convey experiences
  2. Focus on increasing text complexity
  3. Focus on speaking and listening
  4. Focus on text-based evidence for argumentation
  5. Focus on academic vocabulary and language

In addition, the authors highlight the critical importance of PLCs as teachers begin to examine their current practices and prepare for the instructional shifts necessary to meet the demands of the Common Core State Standards. In our district, while we created ELA Units of Study at the district level (with teacher teams), we left the day-to-day planning for instruction at the site level.  The process we introduced in our professional development highlighted the importance of PLCs to ensure that no teacher was working in isolation and that, as a team, teachers were unpacking the new standards.  The more we know about the expectations of the CCSS, the better we are able to align our instruction to both the standards and our students’ needs.

The job of school leaders, and every day practitioners, is to translate these theories into meaningful practice in the classroom.  On-going, job-embedded professional development, through coaching, instructional rounds, lesson study, and high-functioning PLCs, is the structure we have created to support our district on this journey.  As I visit classrooms, coaching teachers and coaches, I am reminded that this is a journey we are all on together.

 

References

Core Standards (2014).  Retrieved on March 28, 2014 from             http://www.corestandards.org/

Fisher, D., Frey, N., and Uline, C.L. (2013).  Common Core English language Arts in a

            PLC at work: Leader’s Guide.  Bloomington, IN: Solution Tree Press.

Gulamhussein, A. (2013).  Effective professional development in the era of high stakes

accountability. National School Board Association: Center for Public Education.

Tschannen-Moran, M. (2004).  Trust Matters: Leadership for Successful Schools.  San

Francisco: Jossey-Bass.           

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Two Years Down, One to Go!

A year ago I wrote a post about surviving the first year of my three-year doctoral program. After rereading that post, so many of my initial lessons still ring true. However, I have some new thoughts to add, now that I have just finished this spring semester. Technically, my second year doesn’t end until the summer classes are over, but graduation is one year from this month (see my countdown clock below!), so I’m within the right time frame!

  • You get out what you put in:  This is 100% as true today as it was last year. I am still in this program to advance my own learning and leadership. I still question why some people chose this program at certain stages in their careers, but their journey is not my journey. I choose to work hard, maintain my integrity (see more below!) and work ethic, and benefit from my own choices.
  • Group work: I still do not enjoy forced group work experiences. However, I must confess that I did enjoy an out-of-the-box version of this recently. In our policy class we had to facilitate a professional book study with a group of professionals in the SDSU administrative credential program. We entered their Wednesday evening class for an hour each week to lead a discussion about a Common Core related reading and to help them make connections to their current and future leadership roles. This group work I enjoyed because it was with a new-to-me group of professionals who were eager to learn and share. We had rich discussions about a variety of topics and everyone participated authentically.
  • Research: Yup. Still reading it. Still digesting it. Still hoping to see more connections between theory and practice within the field. Soon to start actually doing it.
  • Writing: I am proud to say that the initial 30 pages of my dissertation have expanded to 90 pages. Many hours of writing and revising went into those additional 60 pages over the last year. I still struggle to edit and revise my own work, but I put aside blocks of time and set manageable goals for myself and it is working.
  • Integrity: Over this last year, I have begun to question the integrity of many things- individuals, programs, and policies. When decisions are made based on money or personal bias instead of data or reality, I struggle with the rationale of the decision-makers. When people say one thing and do another, I question their integrity. When people act in ways that are not ethical, I wonder if integrity matters to them. Once again, this program is teaching me a lot about myself and how to work with different types of people. It has also taught that when enough is enough, you must speak your mind and remove yourself from certain situations.

I am so happy that I began this journey two years ago, especially now that the end is in sight! I am grateful to my friend Sheila, who not only keeps me sane within this program but who wrote a guest post for my blog on her own accord (well, okay, I bugged her a little!). I am proud of the work I have accomplished, excited to begin my personal research, and ready to be done. I cannot wait to write the final post in this series. Stay tuned…

The countdown clock to my graduation!

The countdown clock to my graduation!

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[Abecedary of Reflection] Possibilities

P: Possibilities

Reflection is often dedicated to the past- what we coulda/should/woulda done if only…  What if we took the time, instead, to reflect on the possibilities of what could be- to look ahead to a bright and hopeful future?

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I like to think about possibilities…

– The possibilities for my own work, writing, life

– The possibilities before my colleagues, and the possibilities of what they bring to our work

– The boundless possibilities of our students- where they may go in the future

This actually reminds me of one of my favorite books/ graduation presents, Oh, The Places You’ll Go by Dr. Seuss. The book’s message is all about the possibilities we all have, if we learn to see beyond the doubt and the negativity and look for the good.

Reflective questions to consider:

  • How do you see the possibilities in any situation?
  • What do you think of when you hear the word possible?

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Things I’m Loving Friday, Volume 4

I enjoy sharing a quick list of the learning and leading “things” that are capturing my attention, sparking my curiosity, or pushing my thinking. This week, here are the things I am loving.

Connections: So often in education we hop from one brilliant idea to another, never spending enough time to make connections between what we know and what we are learning, or where we have been and where we want to go. Lately I have been seeing connections between a wide range of experiences: The Cultural Proficiency class I just finished, a book a colleague loaned me that narrates the experiences of a transgendered individual with CP, and the Restorative Practices workshop I attended for two days this week. All three of these experiences highlight both the good in society as well as the significant struggles of marginalized populations. Seeing these connections makes me even more anxious to DO SOMETHING about it!

 

The power of twitter and my PLN:  Once again, I am impressed by the power of twitter. Last week, in a midst of a terrible back-pain-week, I tweeted out a question for my PLN:

 @DirectorAmy Anyone out there use a stand-up desk? I’m curious                                    (as is my back pain)…

Very quickly I received some responses and was then in contact with a few different companies, where I could view some possible stand-up desks. Soon after, I found a very economical option that came with high ratings, good customer service, an active twitter account, and an app to support useage. The desk should arrive soon… I cannot wait!

UPDATE: The desk arrived and I love it already!  It came with an app that pops up a reminder to move from standing to sitting and vice versa- so cool! Standing Desk!

DoTerra Essential Oils: And in non-education-related news and information, I am personally loving this new-to-be product. A good friend introduced me to the values of essential oils and I have enjoyed experimented ever since. I seriously LOVE their Past Tense blend for headache relief. I also enjoy the Balance, Serenity, and Citrus Blends for night or daytime use.

What are you loving this week?

Previous Things I’m Loving Friday posts:

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[Abecedary of Reflection] Organization

O: Organization

Often when I hear people talk about the reasons [or excuses] they do not reflect much, time is mentioned. I know that I do not have significant more time than other people, so how do I find/ make the time for reflection? For me, it’s all about organization.

I listed my outlook calendar as something I was loving one Friday in a previous post. I am going to cite my calendar as the tool I use to be as organized as I am (and if you ask some of my colleagues, they will attest to this!). My calendar is my life. Literally. And I am very efficient with my time.

Not only do I keep track of appointments and meetings with other people on my calendar, but I also use it as my virtual to-do list. Whenever I think of something I need to complete, I add it to a blank spot on a future date in my calendar. That way, I have a place holder for the work with time dedicated to completing the task. Sometimes I have to move these items, but I rarely lose track of the idea in this way.

When I end up with an empty block of time on my calendar, I make a conscience choice to look ahead to stay organized. I draft emails to be sent later, I see what projects are coming up that I can backwards plan for meetings or deadlines, and I stop to reflect. I continue to reflect in my leadership journal about my work, leadership, and responses to things I’ve recently read or heard. If I open my leadership journal (in Evernote) and see that’s it’s been awhile since I last wrote, I add reflection time into my calendar.

Our team at work facilitates a lot of teacher meetings. With the heightened stress level during busy spring time, we have made it a practice to begin each meeting by asking teachers to reflect for a moment on a successful experience they have recently had in class. Then volunteers share their stories. Not only is this reflection time used and appreciated, but it so great to start a meeting off hearing amazing stories about students and hard-working teachers!

2016 Update: After attending The Breakthrough Coach training last summer, I realized that many of the habits that help me stay organized came from TBC. When I was a Vice Principal, many years ago, I worked for a principal who had been trained in TBC and who was a true instructional leader. He taught me the habits I still use today to prioritize the most important work on my calendar (i.e. classroom visits when students were present and meetings with adults after school hours).

Reflective questions to consider:

  • How do you keep yourself organized?
  • What organization tips would you give to a new leader?
  • How can organization help you reflect more often?

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[Abecedary of Reflection] Networking

N: Networking

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What do you think of when you hear the term “networking”? Since the explosion of social media, networking has taken on a whole new meaning. In my doctoral research, I’ve studied social network learning, which has nothing to do with social media. Social network learning investigates the connections that exist, formally or informally, within an organization.

To me, networking, whether online or in person, is about connections. When we connect with other people, we find common ground, similarities, shared experiences, and even differences, to discuss. While I do my best reflection when I am alone, writing, I find that the topics on which I reflect the most often arrive after a connection with someone else. A conversation with a colleague, a twitter exchange, an excerpt read (yes, I consider my reading to be a connection between me and the author!), all can lead to new thinking.

Reflective questions to consider:

  • How do you network?
  • Do social networks help you reflect as a leader?
  • In what ways can we bring networking into the norm of our educational system?
  • Who or what in your network pushes your thinking?

 

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[Mentor Text Monday] Paragraphs

For my latest mentor text discussion, I am going to study how authors create paragraphs. Based on my recent posts on writing (Fear & Formulas) and discussions with friends and colleagues, I wanted to explore the idea of what a paragraph looks like in various nonfiction texts.

  1. The Art of Coaching by Elena Aguilar

On page 55 Aguilar begins a new section with a short paragraph:

“Understanding adult learning is essential to effective coaching. Many of the ways in which adults and children learn are similar, but there are also some critical ways in which we learn differently, and the conditions for our learning need to be modified in order to support us.”

This is a two-sentence paragraph. It is followed by a paragraph with eight very long sentences. Aguilar is a writer who enjoys commas and long, descriptive, full sentences. But the length of a paragraph depends on the context. She writes in a conversational tone as though she is giving advice over coffee.

2. Making Thinking Visible: How to Promote Engagement, Understanding, and Independence for All Learners by Ron Ritchhart, Mark Church, and Karin Morrison

When I opened up this book to page 8, my current book mark, I looked at the first paragraph of the new section entitled “Beyond memorization, work, and activity”. I’m not even going to copy out this paragraph- it is huge! There are eight sentences in this paragraph, along with three citations and two acronyms. These authors, in this dense, academic text, pack a lot of information into each paragraph. The context is about building historical understanding and background knowledge to make the points that will follow clear and meaningful.

However, what they also do, to break up these paragraphs, is insert large quotes and bulleted lists. These not only physically break up the text, but give the reader an anchor on which to rest, to reflect, while reading.

3. “Rough Forecasts” by Elizabeth Kolbert, The New Yorker

For another text, I decided to move away from my bookcase/ comfort zone and look outside of education. This article is from a regular writer for the Comment section of The New Yorker. There are a total of eight paragraphs in her entire article. What fascinates me the most are the first and last paragraph. The first paragraph is long and includes some very specific details, yet clearly sets up the context of the article. The last paragraph is short- two sentences- and is a clear conclusion to the topic at hand. Each paragraph in between adds historical and relevant details to inform the reader about the topic. The writer’s voice is evident throughout the piece.

4. “Debunking the Myth of the 10,000 Hours Rule: What it Actually Takes to Reach Genius-Level Excellence” by Maria Popova

What I love about this text is how real it is. This is both a summary and a review of a book, told through quotes and pictures and words. The writer of the text, Popova, uses one-sentence paragraphs as well as longer paragraphs (such as the first one) filled with dashes.

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When I think about writing paragraphs in nonfiction texts, I come back to purpose. The context of your writing should determine the structure you, as a writer, create to tell your story.

In no way could I put each of these examples into one common structure; nor if I followed one formula would I end up with anything similar to these diverse texts.

As I continue to reflect on the teaching of writing, as an art, not a formula, I think of how valuable this activity could be for teachers. Just as mentor texts can be used to help students find new ways to explore their use of language, they can also be used to redefine our definitions and expectations.

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[Abecedary of Reflection] Metacognition

M: Metacognition

Metacognition- thinking about one’s own thinking

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“Thinking about one’s own thinking improves performance and the ability to work independently. The ability to stand back and observe one’s own though process is an important skill of effective learners.” – One of the 12 principles of knowledge acquisition by Owen et al. (1994) as quoted in Leading Every Day.

Metacognition shows up a lot in my life.

  • One of my best friends, who is a teacher, spent the beginning of this school year implementing a metacognition journal with her seventh graders. We had many conversations about what she did to help her students reflect on their own thinking as learners.
  • Our district has spent the last two years studying the principles of Strategies That Work and The Comprehension Toolkit by Stephanie Harvey and Anne Goudvis. The principles are research-based strategies that good readers do naturally when comprehending complex texts. Teaching the strategies is all about breaking down the reading process with explicit modeling for students to “see” what goes on inside the heads of good readers.
  • My reflective practices are often about my thoughts about my thinking.
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We can only truly think about our own thinking if we take the time. This reminds me of what I read about meditation. While meditation is NOT a habit I have developed, it is something I strive towards in the future. Both meditation and metacognition require we slow down our mind (deep breathing helps!) long enough to see the thoughts whizzing by. I am a better metacognitioner (is that a word?!) than I am a meditator, but they are both skills I hope to enhance.

Reflective questions to consider:

  • How do you support your metacognition?
  • How do you support the metacognition of teachers and students?
  • Why is it important to think about our own thinking?
  • Do you have any tips for my future mediation practice?

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Formulas for Writing?

After reading my post about the fear some teachers have of writing, one of my best friends told me she was very upset. As a middle school English teacher, she agreed with my notion that many teachers, especially non-English teachers at the secondary level, have a fear of writing. We discussed how the implementation of Common Core State Standards is making all teachers more aware of the role literacy plays in all content areas and that is a big shift.

But it was this line from my original post that upset her:

“Most of us were taught to write using formulaic structures, such as the dreaded five paragraph essay, that have little to no significance in our adult lives.”

She wholeheartedly disagreed with my opinion that the five paragraph essay, or formulaic writing in general, should not be what we teach students. We had a debate and agreed to disagree (so that we could enjoy a peaceful lunch together!). I am still thinking about her words, however, and I’m sure she is still thinking about mine.

My first thought this morning was that I would do a Mentor Text Monday post that pulls out examples of real, nonfiction writing that does not follow the typical hamburger model paragraph. I am going to do that, but not right now!

My next thought was that if my friend, an experienced teacher who is a voracious reader and a strong teacher who cares about kids, feels this way, there are probably many more teachers who feel this way about writing. So not only do we have a community of teachers who may fear writing, but we also have a community of teachers who believe that kids need to learn formulas and structures of writing in order to write.

My third thought went back to this: When, as an adult, do I read or write formulaic texts? I do not read anything like that, because it would bore me and I would put it down! I do not write like that, and haven’t since I was in college. Yes, I was taught the formula of:

  1. Write an introduction in which I tell my reader what I’m going to say in a list with commas
  2. Write body paragraphs, each one telling about one thing I said I was going to say from the list in #1
  3. Write a conclusion that tells the reader what I just told them, listing the items in backwards order from the way I listed them in #1

This formula got me through high school and some of my college writing. This formula was what I taught my students during my first few years of teaching, as so many of us have done. However, once I attended the Columbia University Teacher’s College Reading and Writing Summer Institutes, I was forever a changed reader, writer, and teacher.

Hearing Lucy Calkins herself talk about the power of literacy, of a community of readers and writers, was inspiring. Participating in a week focused on my readerly life followed by a week to develop my writerly life was a life-changing experience. I am forever grateful to my principal who found the funds to support my partner teacher and I in attending these workshops. I realize that not every teacher is afforded this incredible opportunity. But that does not, and should not, mean that the face of writing instruction cannot change.

As I read the ten writing standards outlined by the Common Core State Standards, I see the phrase “multi-paragraph”, but I do not see formula or structure. I see the phrase,       “… appropriate to task, purpose, and audience” in College and Career Readiness Anchor Standard #4.

When I looked up the SAT Scoring Guide for the writing portion of the SAT (this didn’t even exist when I took the SAT MANY years ago!), I found that to receive the highest score possible, a six, a student must do the following:

  • Effectively and insightfully develop a point of view on the issue and demonstrate outstanding critical thinking, using clearly appropriate examples, reasons and other evidence to support its position
  • Is well organized and clearly focused, demonstrating clear coherence and smooth progression of ideas
  • Exhibit skillful use of language, using a varied, accurate and apt vocabulary
  • Demonstrate meaningful variety in sentence structure
  • Is free of most errors in grammar, usage and mechanics

However, the SAT will no longer be using this measure. Some critics say that in such a short time period, students were able to use big words and a simple formula to achieve a high score without writing anything worthwhile. NPR addressed this here. Thank you to my friend and colleague Barb, who shared this tidbit with me and will, hopefully, add her own thoughts on this topic to her blog soon.

To compare, I looked up the ACT Writing scoring guide and found that they have a 12-point rubric in which students are expected to:

  • Express Judgment
  • Focus on a Topic
  • Develop a Position
  • Organize Ideas (in which they do call out an introduction and conclusion)
  • Use Language (to communicate ideas)

Nowhere do I see the idea that a student must follow one particular structure or formula. Nowhere does it outline that a student would be penalized if he or she wrote a one-sentence paragraph, followed by a six-sentence paragraph, followed by some other length paragraph.

What I also don’t see is an acknowledgment of the fact that we write for a purpose.   Writing for a “test” is not an authentic purpose.

Where are we getting the idea that our students cannot be successful in life if we don’t teach them a formula or structure for writing?

When I saw Dr. Tony Wagner speak at the ASCD conference in Los Angeles last month, he discussed how schools are preparing students to be, at best, college students, but not successful adults outside of college. No matter your career choice, the writing we do as adults does not mirror the writing we ask students to do in classrooms all across America. I believe this needs to change.

Writing is a form of communication. Communication is not always simple and neat. It definitely does not always follow a common structure or formula. But when someone is an adept communicator, you know it, you feel it, you sense it, you see it. My hope for our students, and our future, is that we are teaching students to communicate in authentic, purposeful, meaningful ways.

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  • What are your thoughts about writing formulas and structures?
  • What type of writing do you do as an adult outside of school?
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